八旗都统 2011-6-4 18:39
各位老大分析的太好了,作为小说我就得还是海凤凰不要欺骗徐源的好,两个人一起做一番事业,那样我比较好接受。如果不是的话,海凤凰心机很深,那样徐源也会魔高一尺道高一丈,下面的情节就更精彩了。那这部小说将是一部学习在社会上混的好教材。
dragoonld1 2011-6-4 22:44
很好,用手机也要支持你下,真的很不错!!!
fxf_218 2011-6-5 14:06
回复 1楼 的帖子
几个女主角描写的都很贴近生活,感谢楼主分享~
wdtxwzz 2011-6-7 11:29
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xxhdreamsky 2011-6-7 12:37
楼主的新作一直看到现在,感觉比生命的奔流更有现实性、故事性,当然也就更精彩了。到现在为止,出现的最有魅力的女主自然是海凤凰,其实是小说里比较老套的角色,但是在楼主的妙笔下,有了新的光彩,她的性感成熟与美丽让人难以忘怀。而最有前景的我看是陈琳,yy的空间很大。希望楼主能写的更加精彩!
meiliwubian2003 2011-6-8 15:51
是的,我也不能搜索了,还以为是金币不够呢,后来满170个金币也不能搜索。看来论坛的功能出故障了
zzzzzz中文文 2011-6-11 12:53
徐源的女人,越多可以看出徐源爱的越累,这里不但有生活的类,还有社会的带给他沉重的压力,徐源与每个女人的缠绵都是如此的不同,而且都是水到渠成,女人就是徐源生活的一张张网,不知道徐源被网在中央是幸福还是苦闷.
emaremar45 2011-7-8 08:21
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zlufo167 2011-10-28 02:31
了解放在一个个儿孙权利于是
文殊狮吼 2011-12-7 12:39
人与人之间就是利用被利用,玩弄被玩弄的过程。海凤凰利用徐源从赵梅嘴里手机胡的毒品信息,赵梅利用徐源解决她自己的对胡的憎恨,陈森利用拆迁的事情勾引了徐源的老婆,而徐源却又抓住了陈森姐姐陈琳的黑暗阴影,准备威逼利用陈琳,而陈琳却又想通过徐源搭上海凤凰,好找到庄家拜托王市长的对她的蹂躏,环环相扣,错综复杂的关系里只有两个字,利用;情感方面只能说徐源喜欢海凤凰,周幕雪伤了他的心,而且很深;陈琳是他的梦中情人,可已经凋落了。越快越有看头的文章,楼主的把控能力很强。
ainiryun 2012-11-24 15:43
感觉太压抑郁了,有点看阿里布达的感觉了,有点看不下去了。